DIES IRAE

Well this is a story I wrote and illustrated for my Comics School exam.
It's called DIES IRAE, I'm posting below an english translation of the script, correct it if you wish.

DIES IRAE
Mushrooms in the City

MARKWALD: Sometimes the wind
brings unaccustomed gifts.
But now just stop it,
it will soon have no reason to blow.

DOMITILLA: What are you thinking about, Markwald?

M: They're here, Domitilla.
At last our task will be over!
The last human hero, at the head of mortal forces...
HAS FAILED!

D: At last we'll be able to leave this world,
One night of rain would be enough
to let the Noble Eochian perform in Her last path.
Open your umbrellas! It's raining!

Wir alle gestuerzet in ewige nacht...
DIES IRAE!


... well if you think I'm mental ... I am

Pencil, Corel Photo Paint X3
Wacom Graphire